tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8607901532196028224.post7711386027418614955..comments2022-04-02T21:06:46.246+02:00Comments on Live forever: A piece of textCarryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04996268733481160407noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8607901532196028224.post-27021188412107592532011-04-07T21:23:43.333+02:002011-04-07T21:23:43.333+02:00Cheers ty :)Cheers ty :)Carryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04996268733481160407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8607901532196028224.post-31061871975645412962011-04-06T23:06:08.000+02:002011-04-06T23:06:08.000+02:00Except for a few mistakes in punctuation and conju...Except for a few mistakes in punctuation and conjugation of verbs, this looks pretty good! A little tip might be to not be afraid of longer sentences. Semicolons and commas can do more than you'd think.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04132645466999233983noreply@blogger.com